Fantastic volacano haiku, Hiero, I really like the expression "cracking like an egg", sums it up beautifully. I like writing haikus too because, they don't take long and are easy to do, have you tried writing them about other topics?
Kia ora Hiero, Your Haiku describes a volcanic eruption really well! Could you add an image to your slides to make them look more interesting? You could make one in Piskel or Google drawings etc. Also remember to add a Mote of you reading your Haiku so we can hear the rhythm of your poetry as you read. I'm looking forward to seeing what other kind of poem you choose and your Screencastify of your poems. Blog you later, Megan : )
Fantastic volacano haiku, Hiero, I really like the expression "cracking like an egg", sums it up beautifully. I like writing haikus too because, they don't take long and are easy to do, have you tried writing them about other topics?
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Kia ora Hiero, Your Haiku describes a volcanic eruption really well! Could you add an image to your slides to make them look more interesting? You could make one in Piskel or Google drawings etc. Also remember to add a Mote of you reading your Haiku so we can hear the rhythm of your poetry as you read. I'm looking forward to seeing what other kind of poem you choose and your Screencastify of your poems. Blog you later, Megan : )
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