Kia ora Hiero, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. I can see you have thought carefully about which words to use in your writing. I particularly like: "Lava bursts" and "dust explodes like a giant blanket". I have to say, I would be very scared if I was near a volcano when it started erupting!
Wow Hiero, what fantastically descriptive writing! You have obviously thought very hard about which words to use. You have created an startling image in my mind. What kind of volcanic eruption were you thinking of when you wrote this? Megan : )
Kia ora Hiero, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. I can see you have thought carefully about which words to use in your writing. I particularly like: "Lava bursts" and "dust explodes like a giant blanket".
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Wow Hiero, what fantastically descriptive writing! You have obviously thought very hard about which words to use. You have created an startling image in my mind. What kind of volcanic eruption were you thinking of when you wrote this? Megan : )
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