Best Writing i did this week!

Hello bloggers this is some writing i took from a story i did this week its pretty cool!.What do you think?

Slowly they spread their wings after years of hiding they would find their brethren. Years ago they had been ripped away from their families. There would be others out there like them, it would be paradise. The sun began to set and with one final push they were gone.

My book or game review!

Hello bloggers this is my review i made about the strategy game hearts of iron 4 I hope you enjoy it!.

This is my Review for The Strategy game Hoi4.

Hearts of iron 4 Is a game based purely On strategy historical knowledge and sometimes just luck I have played this game for many hours of my life but have still not mastered it You can play as any existing country at the time As an example the soviet union Either Achieving conquest and victory of suffering defeat to your enemies A core mechanic of this game is Strategy if you perform a wrong move this may cause the destruction of your entire army once i played as communist china but i placed my troops in the wrong position and they got encircled one of my favorite aspects of this game is that you can design your own ships (if you have the dlc for it!) Once I designed the HMS Hiero A “Unsinkable” Battleship and it got sunk due to its poor design. You have to Construct infrastructure, produce equipment for your army and Train a well equipped army to have a fighting chance. The game has 2 starting dates: 1936 (3 years before ww2 started) and 1939 (the year ww2 started) . I recommend 1936 for a more enjoyable experience. In total I would recommend this game if you want a challenge and have a keen interest in history. 

Scrambled Writing plan!

 

She Runs Towards the train ready To Jump onto it But it Keeps Going!. Infuriated  she sits down on the bench.

She Pulls her Phone out of Her pocket and begins playing some games.Meanwhile A Rubix cube is sitting down on the floor Suddenly it begins to move.

The rubix cube scuttles  towards The girl Like it was scrambling Towards her suddenly Launching onto her lap she looks down surprised She decides to try and solve it But doesn't have that much luck at first.

She Tries and tries As hard as she can But is unable to Solve it.She Goes back onto her phone in annoyance.

She begins to remember the game she is playing on her phone. It's More similar to the rubix cube than she realised!.She picks up the rubix cube And thinks Of it like a Puzzle Turning it left right and center with her eyes closed the train begins to approach but Then She finishes the rubix cube! She puts it back down and Walks away to the train. The rubix cube Flings itself away to be solved by the next person.

The girl is Better at working out puzzles and Using similarities to find Fixes to problems.

My Epicly Erupting Volcanic Writing !

Word of the day! They Their They,re!

My Coin operated Plan!

A young boy called Jensi and his mother Kate walk along the pathway. Jensi holds his toy Rocket beside him moving it along like it's flying along. He sees a “Rocket” He excitedly jumps up in excitement I can finally go to space! He thinks, His mother tries to pull him along. He pulls out a coin and puts it in the machine,He hops Into the “Rocket” It slowly moves up,Facing The moon Finally I can go to space! He thinks  He  presses the button. The “Rocket” aims up towards the moon Time to blast off he thinks but it just moves up and down slowly. What is this! Wait, if I put in more coins I will go to space! He tries to pull out another coin but he has nothing in his pocket. He throws his helmet in disgust and disappointment.He looks up at a lemonade sign. He gets a sudden flash of a brain wave.Why not make a lemonade stand to make more money!. For 70 years he saved up his money by selling lemonade until he gathered a giant bag of money. He brings it back to the “Rocket” he pours all of his money into the “rocket” He puts on his helmet and presses the button… Nothing happens. ..He bangs on the rocket slowly and the coins fall into the machine. The rockets begin to shake. He looks up YES I'M GOING TO SPACE he thinks suddenly he blasts out towards the sun.

A Mysterious shadow writing

As he unlocked the gate he felt like somebody or something was watching him, he slowly turned on his heel to see, nothing but his own shadow. He continued to attempt to unlock the rusty and old gate. Quickly and quietly the shadow floated across the Garden As he unlocked the gate the shadow floated back inside him…

The Rehutai Writting

 As the grinders put there full force of strength into putting power into the boat the foils extended to slow down as Emirates Team new Zealand touched the finishing line everybody cheered some people were thinking nz would win some thought Luna Rosa would but after that one second that nz raced past them everybody knew it was time for nz to shine then as the boat splashed along the water like a pebble being thrown with perfection like no other crowds cheered the crew of team new zealand were fist pumping like a world war had ended.

Dramatic Plane Crash writing!

BANK ANGLE BANK ANGLE! STALL! He was panicking as all the plane alerts flashed but the plane was operating fine, maybe it was an instrument failure? Before he could even think the engine exploded into flames suddenly the plane pulled up he struggled to regain control then with a flash of blinding light the plane hit the ground he slipped in and out of consciousness he heard an ambulance he could smell smoke on his right the plane had broken into Multiple pieces his leg was extremely hurt or it felt like it he tried to get up but lost consciousness immediately when he woke up he was in some sort of medical center.

Semi realistic i am poem!

 Hi everybody today i made a poem about me o your know im dont really have the title "Dr H.Backhurst-pretty" But i put that in because it makes it look cool