Wednesday 4 November 2020

Athletics Writting

                    Athletics...

                                         3 November 2O2O                                                

“I was running as fast as I could, my body was entering overdrive. I was pushing with as much force as I could allow my legs to go. My brain was getting confused I was running out of Energy”


“On your marks get set,” then the sound of the clap starter went into my ears then everything was in slow motion. I started to run, I didn't care if was going to come last.I just kept running as I was overtaken by everybody I started slowing down. Why was I running a 1OOm Sprint? I run like a 100 Year old man. Then suddenly I realised that didn't matter, I sped up again “Go Hiero!” I heard somebody say but I was only focused on running. My right leg started to hurt and my brain started to become confused but I kept running until I reached the finish line. I was fine apart from that my right leg was hurting insanely.

                                                                       

“Ok get ready we are going to start soon.” I was about to run the 2OOm sprint. The 2nd furthest sprint a Year 5 could run I pushed my right leg back a few centimeters, “on your marks get set” then the familiar sound of the starter went into my ears, then for the 2nd time I ran as fast as I could. There was 1 person behind me, Vincey, he was behind for a bit before he overtook me. I ran as fast as I could. My brain was in overdrive trying to keep up with 2 tasks running and making sure I didn’t destroy my self-esteem. Then after 2 minutes I made It I completed the 2OOm sprint.


2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Hiero I am J'varn here from room 7. I like your writing because Its really good I liked the part when it said My brain was in overdrive trying to keep up with 2 tasks running and making sure I didn’t destroy my self-esteem.
    blog you later

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    1. Hi J'varn Thanks for commenting on my blog I agree that my faviorte part of my writing is when i said i was keeping up with 2 tasks.
      Blog you later
      Hiero

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